Not too bad!
The story was great, the humor was great, and the graphics were decent as well.
However, you could improve your animation and mini-game making skills a tad bit. You should try to at least make something simple like an animation for sitting down.
Overall, good job, and can't wait for part 2.
Also, nice ending! Or cliffhanger, rather. I honestly wasn't expecting it.
The third to last picture thing is the Zoras Sapphire from Ocarina of Time! Did you plan that? Good job on everything, only way I could see you could improve this is add more songs/pictures or maybe add a menu for the pictures, like a gallery or somethin ya know?
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